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I will admit that since my childhood I have always reserved a dark corner in my heart for vampires, werewolves, haunts and most things mythic and mystic.  Though more selective today about what I read of it, I lean toward the dark romantic aspect of the genre.  As with my other poems/prose, not all are posted here - too private!

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Succubus 

Hunter Among Them


(Somehow, I've always thought 'Succubus' ought to be a song....)

Succubus

 

 

Creature of the night 

entraps with lies,

her touch inflaming passions.

 

Succubus she,

yours to never be,

her ways mythic in fashion.

 

Demonly being appears

in your dreams,

succulent wants awaken.

 

Restless your sleep,

those fears are deep.

Peaceful dreams are taken.

 

                 Desires climb

                        a thousand times

and again forever more.

 

Last breath, this night,

no struggle nor flight,

succumbing to ancient lore.

 

Hypnotic, her eyes,

devilishly wise,

you find resisting useless.

 

The will is gone…

weak smile, she’s won.

Poor man, completely helpless.

 

Whom she may choose,

resolve will loose,

prey to this ardent beast.

 

Your soul she has claimed,

empty shell remains…

and in death you find no peace.

 

Succubus - Medieval Christian notion...she copulated with men in their dreams, and sucked out the essence of their souls (semen).  Nocturnal emissions were always attributed to the attentions of  she-demons who "cause men to dream of erotic encounters with women, so the succubae can receive their emission and make therefrom a new spirit."  (A Woman's Encyclopedia of Myths and Secrets - Barbara Walker)  A succubus was also blamed for a young man's death in his sleep - in Medieval times.  The incubus was a male demon who visited women in their sleep and was blamed for misshapen or odd-looking children.  Those children were destroyed at birth, being clearly the offspring of a demon.  Incubuae were also blamed when women of impotent or absent husbands became pregnant.  If those children were normal, and did not die after being bathed in holy water, then it was thought that the 'virtue' of the mother saved it from demonic presence. (One way to explain to a returning husband, I suppose!)


This is the full version of the poem that serves as a prologue to my short story 'Hunter Among Them'.

 

Hunter Among Them

 

The wind howls its fury,

joining eerie chorus

 

Black night,

hunter’s moon,

        evil forebode

 

He unites

his voice with theirs,

solemn song to silver disk

bejeweling indigo night

 

Once each waning moon

human form assumed

life unwinds

        Pantoum

 

Cunning of nature

courses veins ages old

                Ancient

                               

On silent padded paws,

strange hunting stealth

        compels.

 

Indigo night

darkly sensuous,

exciting scent of blood . . .

 


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